Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate changes while others think it is better to learn to live with it.Discuss and state your opinion.

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Certain individuals think that the general public should pay attention to the way of coping with the sudden changes
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weather while other
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believe that it is better to study how to reside with it as much as possible.In
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essay,I will depict from both sides and discuss with my own suggestions. As a saying goes,'Prevention is better than
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,the best solution for everything is protection before
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need to struggle with
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issue like weather conditions.
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of all,
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have to pay full concentration when some announcements
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new advice to them relevant to
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important cases.
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,the accidents of destruction will no longer occur.
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,governments need to deliver effective climate policies
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as carbon footprint reduction, clean energy, sustainable lifestyle and so on to all organisations, factories and individuals to be able to follow them in order to prevent the increase
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worse situations.
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,some
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think that climate change is acceptable and
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should be adaptable to all kinds of situations.In the
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few decades, there were different natural disasters
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in different parts of the world
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as floods, sea-level rise, the melting of the polar ice sheet, droughts, extreme weather and earthquake which are the effects of global warming that cannot be avoided to encounter in some countries.
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,Japan is a country
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earthquakes occur the most,
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,Japanese
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still live in their country and learn how to live with it.
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,their houses and buildings have been built with resilient structures to withstand earthquakes. In conclusion,after analysing both views in detail, it
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that man has to adjust
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the existing situation
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the
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climate change has created.
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, I feel if practical measures are not adopted on an emergency basis, human life on the earth will be questioned.
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