Professional sports are a very large industry in the world today. The most elite players can get contracts worth many millions of dollars. Some say there is too much money in sports and that it defeats the purpose of the actual game.

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play a vital role in today's generation. compared with past days, the

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industry is very large in the world today. the famous players are offered contracts like ads or shoots, they get a lot of

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to do it. and yes it says that there is a lot of

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in

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. some crowd think that that's the reason why it defeats the purpose of the actual

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. I disagree with the statement and will be talking about it later.

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talking about the people who think that indirectly the

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of the player can be influenced by the

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been offered nowadays to them. the reason behind

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thinking can be, that they might be assuming that if the player is not paid well sometimes that can affect the ability of the

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person in the

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does not affect the ability of the person to play well

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talking about Virat Kohli ( famous Indian cricketer). Virat will not be thinking about the

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he will be paid,

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, he will more curious about his

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as he is the captain of an Indian cricket

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.

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looking towards the pay which they get is because they have earned that level of respect and that's the reason why they are famous among us.

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, I have witnessed

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when auctions were held for the IPL

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there were many

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in the

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who

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bought at a higher price

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Yuvraj Singh was the highest paid due to his record. so

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does not affect or demoralize other

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members. to summarize some may think that pay can defeat the purpose of the actual

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not the thing. I would like to suggest society should enjoy

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and believe in the industry