Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. What could be the advantages and disadvantages of being self-employed?

While
people
believe that
job
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such
as lawyers, teachers and doctors should be paid
for
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more money than
the
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job
like
athlete
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and actors as they play a more vital role in the whole society. From my perspective, all kind of jobs has their value, the more money they get, the more risk, shortcoming, and pressure should be taken.
To begin
with, indeed, the so-called ‘dream jobs’
worth
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higher
salary
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as it
known
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for
well-educated
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and professional.
In other words
, the
job
can’t be done if we didn’t have
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master
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or
doctor
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degree.
Secondly
, it
also
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unfair that the movie star and the NBA player is all billionaire because
of
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their talent or gift is inborn. Most of the good looking and height
is
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genetic.
Last
but not least, not only it is hard to become a lawyer, teacher, and doctor, but they
doing
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the
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noble things: defending, teaching, and helping, which definitely has a great contribution.
Thus
,
these
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this job
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job
should be paid more.
However
, the world
just
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like a tremendous machine, and everyone in
this
machine is like
cog
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and screw. We play our own
role
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, mesh together, and collaborate with each other.
That is
,
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the structure functionalism in
the
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sociology. There is no gap and level between all of us.
Furthermore
, in terms of the industry of sport and entertainment, sometimes we just focus on the prestigious one, which does not fair enough due to the fact that other
people
who
is
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not as successful as
them
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doesn’t wealthy either.
Last
but not least, needless to say, every
job
has a drawback, so as actors and athletes.
For instance
, being famous, there is no privacy in their life owing to they are forced to show up
in
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the
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social media and there is no scandal allowed. What’s worse, they have to bear the
people
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rumors
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and the unstable work.
Hence
, it is common that
the
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popular basketball or movie
player
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players
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possess
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extremely high payment. In conclusion,
people
who show up in the basketball course and movie
theater
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seems
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have
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a
colorful
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life.
Nonetheless
, they
also
have a lot of
obstacle
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obstacles
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to overcome.
As a result
, I don’t agree that any other worker
worth
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is worth
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higher salaries.
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