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Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program but extent do you agree or disagree

#education #component #school #program
In
this
 contemporary Era ,
education
 plays an imperative role in everyone's life as per the given notion financial
education
 should be a mandatory component of the school program I partially agree with the given statement and will discuss
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 the subsequent paragraphs
perior
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prior
 to the meaningful conclusion . on the one hand,
let
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shed some light on the given
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viewpoint
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view point
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 as we know
the
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 financial
education
 plays a vital role in
the
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adult life .To commence with, when they earn money they do not have any idea how to tackle
there
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 expenses and they spend their capital on unnecessary things .
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result
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 they have no
any
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benefit .
Moreover
, if
the
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financial
education
 provides to the student they face no
any
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type of difficulty and they are able to full fill their basic needs.
On the other hand
 ,some students
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are not in favour
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this
 decision because of
the
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some reason. To embark with,
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teenagers are busy
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 their hectic
schedule
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 and they already have a lot of subjects which they have read.
secondly
 ,if financial
education
 should be compulsory
this
 may distract their attention from the other subjects and may impact
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the
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 overall development . To encapsulate ,it could be concluded that,according to me additional subjects must have
this
 financial subject owing to which they do not face any type of
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difficulty in the future.
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