Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world.other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely

People
have different opinions about sharing
information
in the scientific,business and the academic world. I believe that both of them have pros and cons. In
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I will discuss and give some examples from my view. Freely sharing
information
helps
people
in their life in many ways because the
information
is necessary in life
for example
when
student
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needs
information
for
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courses or for essay
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so good for them to have them accessible like
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the library
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and the internet are
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good example in
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situation you can share and update the
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quickly.
On the other hand
, having
information
freely and immeasurably could be harmful.
Information
is important; sometimes, when it’s free, some
people
copyright them and use them without the source name. Sometimes
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so much
information
could be used in the wrong ways.
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there is so much
information
in
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business and
academic
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people
should choose the correct
information
and try to avoid copyright
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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