Last month, you travelled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter  apologise for not meeting him/her  explain why you did not contact him/her earlier  suggest a time and place to meet in the future

Dear Love, Hope
this
letter finds you in pink of your health. As you know that I came to your city
last
month for one week ,
unfortunately
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I was unable to meet you there due to some unavoidable circumstances. I am sorry from the depth of my heart for not seeing you at your place. Basically, I was there to care for my maternal aunt who is in her
last
stage of cancer and received palliative care at home from nurses. As I promised her to stay with her for a few days,
however
, when I reach there, after 5 hours she passed away. Apparently, I phoned my parents to reach there and attend all the death ceremonies for the
last
7 days.
This
is the reason that I was not able to see you and get no time to write to you. I guess you will understand the whole condition. There was a sad moment for my mother and other family members that's why I have to be there to console them. I am planning to come again there for the transfer of the property of my maternal aunt
next
week. It would be great if you could meet me. I would come there Wednesday so it would be ok to meet on Friday or Saturday evening. Write to me when you will be available so that I would plan
accordingly
. Waiting for your reply. Best wishes Ammy Sandhu
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