A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter, explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear sir, I am writing
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letter with regard to applying for unpaid
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at your exhibition building.
To begin
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with, I am an international student in Canada and living quite close to your museum. Currently, I am on my four-month vacation break,
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I would like to gain some valuable experience in volunteer
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by using my time in a productive way.
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,
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work
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not only fosters my experience but
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gives me the bullet point for my resume, which can help me in future for job finding.
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, I have excellent communication and leadership skills ,which can certainly be fruitful to fulfil the requirements of
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work
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, I have a presentation quality,so I am able to explain to visitors about the
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of the museum.
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,as I mentioned above I am on summer vacation,so I am available any time during the week other than Sunday. Please let me know if you require any
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information. Yours sincerely Parth
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coherence
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coherence
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grammar
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structure
The letter has a clear structure with an opening, body, and closing.
tone
The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for the context.
content completeness
The writer clearly explains their reasons for wanting the voluntary position and their relevant skills.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Volunteer
  • Part-time
  • Unpaid work
  • Museum director
  • Skills and qualities
  • Customer service
  • Organization
  • Team player
  • Flexible
  • Reliable
  • Positive attitude
  • Availability
  • Professional goals
  • Community contribution
  • References
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