One way to reduce the problem of traffic congestion is by increasing the tax on private vehicles. Do you think this is a feasible solution?

Nowadays,

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is a major problem across the globe. People are paying heavy taxes for using the vehicle whether it is public

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private. In my opinion, raising the fee is not a solution.

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because it multiplies the pollution which is a reason

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global warming. People used

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for their convenience and even if

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are going up

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humans cannot stop to buy

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.

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, in past few years, rates of automobiles and fees are increased but

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purchasing is increased by 30% as compared to previous years.

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, it is difficult for

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or middle class to afford it.

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, humankind will go against the law if tax rates will be on

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side.

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, more taxes means

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on

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public .

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, it is essential for humankind to

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about the environment.

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,

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next

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generation cannot be suffered from any environmental causes.

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, many countries

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started

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for odd and even number of vehicles to control

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.

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must have to issue guidelines and training for

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public to avoid

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.

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, it can be controlled with the efforts of awareness. To conclude, it is

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of all the citizens as well as authorities to take steps to reduce

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traffic

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and pollution.

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, authorities should not impose more

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as

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are already paying road, toll

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and many more.