The increase in tourism has led to the destruction of the environment, thus tourism ought to be banned in certain areas. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, people have great interest to see
the
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different places which
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related to our ancient times. Due to
this
,
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of travellers
are
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elevated which leads to
ruination
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the ruination
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of our surroundings. Many masses believe that these sites should be prohibited. In my opine,
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humankind have
right
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the right
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to travel and visit
the
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places.
To begin
with, we all are connected to our tradition and ancient buildings are
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the significance
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significance
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of
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our culture.
Moreover
, humans want to see the beauty of the countries.
For example
,
Taj
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the Taj
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Mahal is
seventh
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wonder of the world and millions of tourist
comes
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to see it every year.
Moreover
, its beauty was not
same
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as 19th century because of travellers.
In addition
to
this
,
tourist
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tourists
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enjoyed the ancient buildings but
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take care of cleanliness. They write
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on walls and put cans,
plastic
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and plastic
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in plastic which badly affects the species.
Hence
, we cannot stop the visitors to explore the regions.
On the other hand
, Government has to set
instruction
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and impose
fine
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for
public
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the public
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who try to create
any
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pollution and harm
the
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nature.
Furthermore
, individuals have to feel that it is their responsibility to take care of
environment
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the environment
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for future
prospect
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prospects
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and for
next
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the next
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generation.
For instance
, in many famous gardens where all
type
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of ferns and petals are available, on
notice
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board
specially
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it is written that if anyone plucked
flower
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then
they have to go for imprisonment or
heavy
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fine.
Thus
, these steps can help to save Mother Nature. To conclude, I believe that ban is
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solution
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the solution
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to
make
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our climate clean. The guidelines have to
set
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by authorities for
limited
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a limited
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number of visitors per year.
Therefore
,
this
is a solution which assists both
to
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our environment and human beings.
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