Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people argue that the eligible age for marriage is 21 or more. I strongly agree with

this

notion mainly because of maturity and financial readiness. At 21 , young individuals are considered ready before getting married because, at

this

stage, they are classified as mature. Their maturity is based on and supported by their education which they have experienced previously because usually, they have graduated from an undergraduate program.

As a result

, they will calmly face every challenge in their future married life.

In other words

, youngsters who marry at an early age tend to ruin their relationship by having more disputes with their spouses. It ends with a divorce

due to

their lack of maturity which can be seen from the vast number of separations among young Indonesian couples nowadays.

Furthermore

, a 21-year-old bride is considered more independent in terms of finances. Economics issues have become the most common problem among couples in Indonesia.

Therefore

, preparing for financial readiness by becoming

well literate

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in regard to

economy

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, and possessing enough capital, are crucial for every individual.

For example

, the more ready the brides are

financial

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financially

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, the easier their life in the future will be.

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is because they have already eliminated one of the potential problems. Achieving

such

financial independence before adolescence is normally difficult;

hence

, allowing under 21 years old to marry will

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them many future problems. In conclusion, issuing a policy requiring brides to be at least 21 years old is the right decision since marriage should be prepared well and supported by the couples’ psychological and financial readiness.