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The decline in the number of people reading books is a concern for many. What measures can be taken to promote reading and support the publishing industry?

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Nowadays, the decline of people interested in reading has become a relevant issue in our society.
This
 essay will present solutions to improve reading rates among the population and promote the industry of book production. Primarily, promoting the habit of reading depends on public campaigns, aimed at the access to printed materials by young students.
This
 is because the interest in
books
 is more appealing during the primary school period, and governmental initiatives capable of providing a higher amount of
books
 to schools could raise the number of new readers in these communities.
For instance
, the Brazilian Federal Government implemented the National Reading Program, which has been allocating funding for school libraries since 1992, allowing free-of-charge access to
books
 to low-income students all around the country.
Secondly
, the publishing economic sector may be supported by a tax reduction policy related to the publishing production chain.
This
 is important since taxes have a significant impact on printing's final price, and its decline would result in
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 upward trend in book sales, positively impacting on publisher's finances. To illustrate, in 2004, the Brazilian Federal Government exempted publications, bookstore operations, and editorial companies, leading to cheaper
books
 and improving their sellings. To summarize, the decrease in readers is an important problem to be faced, and to do so, I propose the establishment of incentivization public campaigns focused on young pupils, to foster children's reading, and the reduction of
books
' final price through the implementation of a taxation reduction policy destinated to the publishing industry. With these two measures, I believe that it is possible to foster reading habits and collaborate for the publishing sector's economic development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • publishing industry
  • literary festivals
  • audiobooks
  • eBooks
  • book fairs
  • literacy programs
  • financial support
  • subsidies
  • bookstores
  • public libraries
  • technology integration
  • reading campaigns
  • celebrities and influencers
  • social aspect
  • visual impairments
  • tech-savvy
  • stress reduction
  • knowledge expansion
  • concentration
  • creativity
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