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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the tradition in music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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Music
 has diversified into many varieties throughout many years, but its importance has yet to fade.
Music
 expresses feelings, gratitude,
sorrow
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and sorrow
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 and can be heard everywhere. Despite the popularity of international
music
, I believe traditional
music
 is much more important.
Music
 has been a pillar of human society for centuries.
Music
 is something that everyone is accustomed to, something
that is
 heard no matter what the time is or where on the planet Earth you are. It allows people to connect with one another, regardless of age and gender. Even for youngsters, nursery rhymes and songs are typical methods of learning.
Music
 is played during moments of joy and celebration as a form of entertainment. As many years have passed,
music
 has cemented itself as a vital part of the culture and has evolved into many categories. Preferences
of
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for
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 certain types of
music
, which reflect their own personal experiences,
has
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have
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 become common. As
such
 preferences build, traditional
music
 tends to be pushed aside, overshadowed by the more vibrant international
music
. The new and expressive hip hop tends to be much more catchy, gaining the attention of the newer generation.
However
,
the
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old and classical
music
are
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 just as crucial. The national tunes contain the country’s history and the work its people had done, which serve as a motivation for those listening.
Music
 has a great influence
overall
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over all
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the
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 globe and a world without it is quite hard to imagine. Due to the rising interest in international
music
, traditional
music
 has become a thing of the past.
However
, it should not be forgotten as they explain our roots, and how far we have developed.
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