IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 6

Some people believe that people have the right to University education and government should make it free no matter what they are financial backgrounds extent do you agree or disagree ?

#people #right #university #education #government #matter #backgrounds
Education
 plays a great role in an individual's life and
people
 have the right to
education
. Some
people
 think that the public has the right to university
education
 and the
government
 should make it free of cost for all irrespective of student's financial background. I strongly disagree with
this
 statement and I think that the authorities should help only poor
children
 to complete their
education
. I will explain my reasons for it in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, there are many reasons why the
government
 should only
offer
 free
education
 for poor
children
education
 rather than rich
people
,
this
 is because wealthy
people
 have the capability to afford their
education
 with expensive college fees but poor backward classes individuals cannot afford that
education
.
Firstly
, the
government
 should help poor
children
's
education
 by providing scholarships and grants which help them to finish their university and college studies.
For example
, developed countries like Singapore and the USA offers fund and scholarships to their poor
students
 to finish their
education
, which will
also
 be beneficial for the country's growth.
Furthermore
, the
government
 should
offer
 free courses for lower backward class
students
 who are eligible to study in prestigious universities but due to lack of financial support, they failed to admit to these colleges, so the authorities should only
offer
 these
students
 to finish their courses for free of cost.
Also
, it totally wastes money if the
government
offer
 free study for rich
children
,
this
 is because they can afford their
education
, so the authorities should help other
people
 who are suffering from accommodation and food problems. To conclude, I think that the
government
 should only provide free
education
 for poor backward classes
students
 rather than wealthy
people
, it will beneficial for the countries to develop their economic and
education
 sectors more effectively.
Submitted by azone2646 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: