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The bar charts compare how much money people in E had to averagely spend on their accommodation as well as that in their capital city and other regions in 2 years, 1995 and 2013. In general, the average
house
 price in
England
, including in
London
, increased over the given period.
Moreover
, the average figure for
England
, in general, was always lower than that of
London
, with the gap being enlarged with time. In the year 2013, Midlands and Northeast were the two regions that had the most affordable
house
 price, while houses in South East, Southwest and Northwest cost more considerably. In 1995, it cost 130k pounds on average to afford a
house
 in
England
, while that amount in
London
 was 70k higher. 8 years later, the
house
 price in
England
 increased to 200k. Yet, it took people double to possess a
house
 in
London
, which was over 400k to be specific. In 2013, accommodation in Southeast, Southwest and Northwest cost from 200k to over 300k.
However
, houses in the remaining two regions, Midlands and Northeast only priced a
third
 of that in Southeast, which was just around 100k.
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