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some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food, clothes, and entertainment is likely to result in a society of indviduals who ony think abouth their own wishes . other peoplebelieve that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them . discuss both views and give ypur own opinion.

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Many people think that letting
children
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 choose what to eat, wear, and play with may result in making them selfish personalities in the future.
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, other people claim that raising
children
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ability
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 to take
decisions
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 is beneficial for them. I believe that
youngesters
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youngsters
 should be able to decide what they want from
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 age for several reasons. On the one hand, if the kids are allowed to decide their
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everyday
everday
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everyday
 choices, they may take
decisions
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 that have negative outcomes
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their
thier
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their
 lives.
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, if
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youngsters are free to choose their
food
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, most probably they will choose fast
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 and desserts
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 of healthy
food
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 and vegetables.
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, they may wear clothes that are not suitable for the occasions and situations.
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, in Sweden, some schools let the students dress freely
what
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in what
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 they like when going to
schools
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school
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, so some students wore sports outfits, while others wore home
pijamas
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pyjamas
.
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, if they choose how to spend their free time rather than the parents choose the best for them, they will choose video games that will harm their eyes and brains rather than
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useful
 interactive entertainment methods.
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, all of these could result in making them
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 persons in the future.
On the other hand
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, I consider that letting the infants take
decisions
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 and actions regarding their lives is vital for them for many reasons.
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, when
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young
children
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 decide and choose what they prefer to eat , wear, and entertain
by
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 the assistance of their parents in what is
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most suitable for them, they will grow up as a decisive, effective
personality
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personalities
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 for
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society.
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, their character will develop faster,
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 to their skills and capabilities, so they will be reliable to lead the nations in the near future.
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, in Japan, the students in
the
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primary schools are
teached
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taught
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 to decide
choosing
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to choose
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 from selected healthy
food
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 and
playing
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play
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 from selected games at
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 stage, which resulted in making Japan's youth
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the most productive and reliable youth around the world. In conclusion, I hold the notion that
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children
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characters
charachters
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characters
 are developed when they are taught to take
decisions
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about
abouth
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about
 their daily lives at
young
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a young
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 age, and
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 result in many benefits for themselves and the societies.
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