More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks
In
this
modern day, many people
decide to study
study
in Remove the redundancy
apply
other
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another country
other countries
country
where they live. Unquestionably, studying abroad decision has some benefits and drawbacks as well. In my opinion, studying abroad will give much
more positive impacts than Correct quantifier usage
many
the
disadvantages. Correct article usage
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This
essay will explain some reasons why studying abroad is a good choice for Add an article
the student
a student
student
who Fix the agreement mistake
students
want
to continue their education Change the verb form
wants
in
the universities or colleges level.
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at
Firstly
, the motivation for a
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apply
people
to continue study
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studying
the
foreign Correct article usage
a
country
can be
vary. Some popular reason is they want to get Unnecessary verb
apply
better
educational Correct article usage
a better
experience
than in home
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their home
country
. Add a hyphen
World-class
World class
universities might not be based in their Add a hyphen
World-class
country
so in order to get it, some people
decide to study
abroad. Although
it needs extra preparations like studying a new language, allocate
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allocating
a
bigger money for transportation, tuition fee and living cost, Remove the article
apply
educational
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the educational
experience
is a crucial thing for an individual’s future life
, whether as a professional worker or an entrepreneur. For instance
, I have a former classmate who graduated from foreign
university and easily get Add an article
a foreign
in
the top four consulting Change preposition
into
company
in the Fix the agreement mistake
companies
world
which gives a really good salary. Therefore
, studying abroad especially
in Add the comma(s)
,especially
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a top
top class
university can lead someone to get better future.
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top-class
Secondly
, studying in foreign countries will enrich student’s
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students’
experience
in adapting with
diverse Change preposition
to
people
. This
is an important life
skill as the world
enters globalization
era. The Correct article usage
the globalization
world
is much more borderless and in the
professional Correct article usage
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work
an individual might have to collaborate with other Add a comma
,work
people
around the globe. By studying abroad, an individual can learn how to communicate with other people
with
different Change preposition
of
nationality
, Fix the agreement mistake
nationalities
race
, and cultural Fix the agreement mistake
races
background
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backgrounds
This
experience
would never be taught in the local school, instead
, a person can train this
skill by living in other
place than their home nation. Correct article usage
a other
For example
, I have a friend who has completed his study
in other
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another
country
and has good skills in coordinating professional work with corporate’s
partner representatives from other countries. Change noun form
corporate
Also
, he has very
good career progression Correct article usage
a very
than
other colleagues who have not experienced living outside the homeland
In summary, studying abroad can make someone get a good education and multicultural Change preposition
to
life
experience
. These two aspects can bring positive
impact Correct article usage
a positive
for
someone’s Change preposition
on
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