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In the past, buildings ofien reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar.What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing?

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In today's world, while modernization is at its peak, architects are building nearly the same architecture here and there.
Although
 most people find it amazing, I consider
this
 a bad thing for society. To support my argument, I present the following information. To start with, there are numerous beautiful reasons to have a variety of buildings across the cities.
Firstly
, architects should be creative
instead
 of copying ideas of fellow developers, they should think of new architecture for their projects.
For example
, creativity leads to building an eye-catching building and can be appreciated by the audience.
Additionally
, people find it more attractive when the look and feel of the city or country are represented by its unique layout of skyscrapers and houses.
For example
, Italy is known for its world-famous engineering and the Taj Mahal is one of the seven wonders of the world because of its beautiful design.
However
, designing houses and buildings of the same architecture across the cities has its own advantages like immigrants find it easy to settle in a new city or province, but in
this
 ,way the country may lose its cultural diversity. To conclude,
although
, having similar buildings all over the world holds its advantages, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
Hence
, architects should be creative and flexible while designing for a city or country keeping its cultural value in mind.
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