In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued by some

people

that a higher tax should be implemented by

government

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the government

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on junk food as it significantly renders

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citizens

citizents’

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citizens’

health

issue

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issues

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which they are dealing with nowadays. I firmly disagree with

this

opinion and believe that thriving an understanding and awareness of

healthy

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lifestyle on

people

is much more fundamental than forcing them to pay more tax.

First

of all, I’m inclined to believe that internal encouragement is more powerful than external enforcement to urge

people

for having

balanced

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diet.

Therefore

,

instead

of imposing a higher tax so that

people

do not consume fast food

exessively

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excessively

, it is better for

government

to

instill

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a better

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understanding

undertanding

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understanding

and awareness of healthy life

to

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the

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citizens

citizents

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citizens

.

This

can be done by activating healthcare

centre

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centres

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in the community and holding

a

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apply

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regular

health

consultation

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. These measured actions will most likely address

this

health

issue among

community

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since they possess ample knowledge related to a healthy diet.

Secondly

, to support

people

undertaking a healthy lifestyle,

government

and private-

health

organisations should provide more free-access

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amenities

aminities

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amenities

such

as

gym

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and

sport

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centres for the

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citizens

citizents

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citizens

. As

such

,

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citizens

citizents

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citizens

cannot make an excuse that the

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availability

availibility

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availability

of public space for doing exercise is limited.

Furthermore

,

government

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the government

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could

also

promote

health

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healthy

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behavior

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behaviour

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by hosting a monthly

sport

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competition covering all sexes and ages so that

people

are triggered to do more

health

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activities in their daily lives.

For instance

, officials could hold a youth competition

in

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a

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village level as many youngsters can involve and maintain their physical

health

. In conclusion, I thought that the increasing price of fast food is not a long-

last

solution

for

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health

problem

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problems

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such

as obesity.

Conversely

, the awareness coming from

individual

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individuals

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will perhaps

be

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last

for

people

’s long lives.