Some people think that the government should spend taxpayers’ funds on cultural activities such as music or art. Others think this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Since time immemorial, taxation has been a source of revenue generation for every governmental entity in a nation. In view of

this

, there is an irrefutable debate that discusses whether money generated from

taxes

should be spent on activities

such

as music or art

while

several folks disagree with

this

position. In

this

essay, I

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take a distinctive look at both sides in the paragraphs below

while

I conclude with my own opinion.

To begin

with, spending

taxes

on entertainment activities

such

as music or art would help increase the

government

's revenue from

this

sector. There are many countries that undermine the strength of entertainment which has proven to be one of the

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sectors of late.

For instance

, there are many Nigerian artists in the entertainment industry

such

as Wizkid, Davido and Burna Boy who are currently earning royalties which simply signifies that if the

government

invests in their careers and provides the necessary support to enhance growth, there would be more money coming in for the

government

. Invariably, investing taxpayers' funds in

this

sector will help increase revenue for the

country

.

On the other hand

, spending money generated from

taxes

on activities

such

as music and art is detrimental to the

country

's economy. Looking at it from a very neutral view, there are several important things the

government

needs to splash

taxes

on which would help prevent the recession in the nation.

For example

, eradication of poverty, supporting small business owners in order to help stabilize the economy, promote a sustainable society, construction of public structures

such

as road, and train stations and maintenance of the

country

's asset as a whole is more vital

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to promote growth and stability in the nation. Undoubtedly, spending

taxes

on other thriving matters is very pivotal. In a nutshell, spending

taxes

on other important issues in the

country

has several pivotal benefits in order to help stabilize the

country

and

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improve its economy.

Conversely

, I would recommend that the

government

adheres to the status quo in order to prevent economic downfall.