Some people believe that technology has made man more social and others think it has made him less social. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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era
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technology become
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part
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the
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society .It changes the lifestyle of
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that
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advancement
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more social while other reject
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controversy over a potential impact in recent
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the ideas and
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a view on
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conclusion. Analyzing the statement the
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invention of various chatting apps .These applications
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beneficial for
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individuals
who find difficulty and feel shy to talk with
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another
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person
.They can easily make friends through social media platforms .
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instagram
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,
facebook
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,
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those
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are
the
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applications which
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very helpful for
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intovert
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introvert
persons
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.
However
, the most prominent reason is that it
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the
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problem
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problem
of
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unemployment
unemployement
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unemployment
.
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various type of jobs through the advancement of
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technology
technolgy
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technology
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instance google
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a job related to various qualifications and these jobs
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mostly work from home .
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that innovations made man
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a more
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social
person
. On the flip side, due to innovation
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losses
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their link with their traditional culture .Many youngsters didn't know about their
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history and values.To
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exemplify
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exemplify
in
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people send
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invitation
invitations
cards during the time of
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but
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they can send their invitation by sending
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a message
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through
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WhatsApp
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which may mostly hurt old
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feelings
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fellings
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feelings
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.
Thus
these are the reasons why some
individuals
reject
this
notion. In my opinion , advancement in
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mechanism
make
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mans
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life more easy and
social
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more social
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.
Individuals
can go anywhere in the world with
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innovation
of
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transport .
In
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instance through aeroplane
person
can easily plan their trip to
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,
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Canada
,
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etc .
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through online shopping sites
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the individual
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individual
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individuals
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can easily
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branded and international
stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
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like clothing ,shoes , mobile phone and laptops . Because of these
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i
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think
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technology
technolgy
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technology
changes a man more social To
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recapitulate
, according to the argument aforementioned above .one can reach to
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conclusion that benefits of using
technolgy
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technology
to change
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individual to social
person
are indeed great
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social interaction
  • connect
  • communicate
  • video conferencing
  • stay in touch
  • online communities
  • forums
  • like-minded individuals
  • global communication
  • collaboration
  • access to information
  • knowledge
  • bridge the gap
  • social isolation
  • detachment
  • face-to-face communication
  • genuine human connection
  • maintain
  • real-life interactions
  • balance
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