The IELTS Teacher Guided Answer Mastering IELTS Writing Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are no families in

this

world having no disputes in their families. Two different people will have different points of view and it will very possible to create some disagreements. That matter happens

also

to

parents

as they came from two distinct backgrounds.

Moreover

, those different points of view that lead to a conflict will

also

arise in

parents

' and

children

's relationships.

This

essay will elaborate on how that will affects

children

's growth from both positive and negative possibilities. It is good if something is started from the good news, so the writing will explain the positive one

first

. If the conflict in families could not be avoided at all, people can possibly change the way to face and react to the contradiction.

Moreover

, it will be better if there is at least one person to be a middleman during the situation.

For example

, if a father advised his

son

not to always fights with others at school in anger and the

son

is still stuck in his mind,

then

a mother could take the role of a calm mediator. She needs to monitor and understand both sides' arguments.

Then

, she can start to talk to her

son

first

to give an explanation of the bad of having a fight with others. After that, she can approach her husband to overview her husband's manner in reprimanding their

son

. In

this

way, a kid can see that his

parents

actually love him and want the best for him.

In addition

, he could learn how good communication solved the problem. Wiseman said, the broken bottles can be repaired, but they still create scars. It is really related to the family's friction.

Thus

, it is better to avoid conflict as long as possible because it usually creates bad memory, especially for kids, even though everything had been back to normal. It could

also

impact the

children

's feelings and future character like being a grumpy or arrogant person. In conclusion, I agree that prevention is much better than mending. So, in my opinion,

parents

need to have more patience in growing their

children

by trying to understand their emotional stages in order to prevent negative disagreement because we are not always in positive vibes to tackle the negative side of the fight.