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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers,should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some
people
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 argued that experts or
specialists
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 who had professional
skills
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 should stay in their nations,
however
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, other
people
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 think that professionals have the freedom to choose the place they want
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 of asking them back to the country they did training. On the one hand, it is so common that governments would provide scholarships to train potential
specialists
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 and sign a contract to ensure that these professionals will stay in the countries. From the government's perspective, they look forward to preserving some outstanding experts and believe these trained
people
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 will contribute to our society.
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,
people
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 who are rewarded with free tuition as their scholarship can put more emphasis on their work, sharpening their
skills
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 as possible as they need.
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 means that they got more opportunities to pursue better
skills
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 and achievements.
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, the
specialists
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 who received the scholarship but didn’t stay would be a huge loss to society.
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, other
people
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 believe that we all have options to select the nation we want to live
.
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 It’s not only about human rights but
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 the lifestyle we pursue.
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, some of the contracts required trained professionals should serve in the countryside for at least five years,
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, we all understand it is not convenient at all. Sometimes, the resources are lacking, it will be difficult if doctors want to have complicated surgery in a small hospital. In summary, I partly agree that trained
specialists
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 should stay in their country and provide their
skills
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 to society. If they have gained the scholarship and service from the government, it is necessary to follow the contract and contribute to the place that offered training.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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