You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem

Dear Sir, I am studying

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your institution and doing

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a short

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short term

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course

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for

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Diploma

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a Diploma

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in Mass communication. I have paid

fee

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including accommodation

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. I am from Ireland and hardly have knowledge about housing and apartment in Australia. I am sorry to say that arrangement which is provided by you is not satisfactory. I have mentioned that

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am looking for

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a single

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and spacious

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. Unfortunately, I was given a shared

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that I have been sharing with another student for the

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couple of weeks. The

room

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is not enough to support

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healthy life for two persons and

room

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ventilation is dreadful. Fresh air and sunlight can hardly get in. It is far from

academy

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and takes 35 minutes to reach by walk.

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, there is no power back up which disturbs me in concentrating on my studies. I thought I was getting a single

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with enough sunlight and airflow and which would not be far away from the campus.

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, a shared accommodation was arranged for me that has a poor ventilation system. So, I requested you kindly change the

room

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or solve the above problem which assists me to complete my course successfully. I am looking forward to getting your support regarding

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matter. Thank you in advance. Yours Sincerely, Peter