You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem

Dear Sir, I am studying
in
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your institution and doing
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a short
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short term
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course
of
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Diploma
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a Diploma
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in Mass communication. I have paid
fee
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including accommodation
also
. I am from Ireland and hardly have knowledge about housing and apartment in Australia. I am sorry to say that arrangement which is provided by you is not satisfactory. I have mentioned that
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am looking for
single
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and spacious
room
. Unfortunately, I was given a shared
room
that I have been sharing with another student for the
last
couple of weeks. The
room
is not enough to support
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healthy life for two persons and
room
ventilation is dreadful. Fresh air and sunlight can hardly get in. It is far from
academy
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and takes 35 minutes to reach by walk.
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, there is no power back up which disturbs me in concentrating on my studies. I thought I was getting a single
room
with enough sunlight and airflow and which would not be far away from the campus.
Instead
, a shared accommodation was arranged for me that has a poor ventilation system. So, I requested you kindly change the
room
or solve the above problem which assists me to complete my course successfully. I am looking forward to getting your support regarding
this
matter. Thank you in advance. Yours Sincerely, Peter
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