A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday * describe some possible disadvantages * say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Martin, I hope you are doing well. I am writing a letter to provide you
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an
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important information since you are planning to go
first
time on a camping holiday
this
summer. I am very much confident that you will really enjoy the camping holiday.
Firstly
, the location is extremely beautiful, clean and safe. Fortunately, it is very close to
river
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which will definitely give you nice
surrounding
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and you will enjoy nature. There are so many facilities at the site,
therefore
, you will not face any difficulties.
However
, I would like to mention some drawbacks as well. The area is having telephone network issues.
Thus
, you will not be able to contact someone. For that, you need to go nearby town.
Furthermore
, you have to be careful about insects which will harm you during
night time
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.
Nevertheless
, you may use
spray
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to avoid it. I wanted to join
with
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you. Unfortunately, I am having practical exams for
last
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semester of my engineering
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course
couse
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course
.
As a result
, I would not be able to go with you for it. No worries, we may plan again in future and enjoy it Please take care and give my regards to your family members.
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lovingly, Anand
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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