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Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on them? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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This
 essay is about the usage of computers by
children
 from childhood and spending whole days on them. I am going to discuss both pros and cons. Overall, there are a lot of benefits of using computers from an early age the reason being is
children
 can learn from computers by using the software.
Similarly
, a child can draw on the
computer
 and make different cartoons and other drawings that he likes in
this
 way he can reflect his mental growth.
In addition
, with help of computersrschildren can learn more actively they can search about the world and compare their thoughts with others.
For instance
, if a student is writing on some educational topic he can relate his writing to other students on the same platform.
Conversely
, as there are many plus points of
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 but there are
also
 negative aspects.
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computer
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 for hours it can
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 eyesight as well as physical health.
Furthermore
, students waste their precious time by playing games on
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 and spend less time
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 their studies.
Nonetheless
, over usage of
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effects
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bonding
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 of
children
 with their parents and as result
children
 have less time for their parents which is immoral. From the discussion, I conclude that there should be a
balance
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 timing for using
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computer
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.
Also
, use
computer
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 for study purposes
instead
 of playing games and extra activities.
In addition
,
this
 is in one's own
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 to use something for good or bad.
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