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Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

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There is a fierce controversy about whether
children
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 should be punished when committing
crimes
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 or whether their
parents
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 must be the persons to receive punishments because they fail to educate their offspring.
While
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 some agree that
parents
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 of young
criminals
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 should be punished, I would argue that people should be responsible for their illegal actions regardless of their age, but
parents
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also
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 should educate their
children
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 about what is right and wrong. On the one hand, people often assume that a child who commits a crime on purpose is less likely to come from a well-educated family. Their
parents
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 may be collar-blue workers who are busy making money to make ends meet so they do not have much time to talk and share with their
children
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 let alone read and research the information related to
children
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's psychology.
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, if
parents
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 are
criminals
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, their
children
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 will be more likely to become one.
Children
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's worldwide views will be shaped when they live with
criminals
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 as they witness their family members commit
crimes
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 on a daily basis. They will be clueless about what is acceptable and unacceptable
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 becoming violent and heartless when they grow older.
On the other hand
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, I would argue that
children
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 should be punished when committing
crimes
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 as it is important for them to understand the laws and rules so that they will feel more discouraged to commit
crimes
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 again after release. Their family background can distort the true value of life, but they have the power to relearn it. Rehabilitation centres or exclusive prisons for juveniles give young individuals a chance to see the world from different angles and gain insight into the law. They,
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, may become more open-minded and compassionate.
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,
parents
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 should pay more attention to their offspring and invest time and effort in reading and researching
children
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's psychology In conclusion,
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 people argue
parents
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 of young
criminals
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 should be strictly punished for their
children
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's wrongdoings, I believe that
children
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 should take punishments on their own because of the potential benefits mentioned above.
Instead
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 of blaming the
parents
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 of young
criminals
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, the public should encourage each other to always strive to educate our
children
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 better.
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