Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at school and at home. To what extent you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, some people argue

children

have to learn via new technologies like

. Overall, I agree with

this

opinion. In

this

essay, I describe why I believe that they should learn with them.

For instance

, in my country, there are a lot of

shows which include interesting content. We can study not only typical learning resources but

also

the latest technologies. We can't get them from textbooks because they take a long time to be attended these trending ones. They are so important to learn deeply basic math and science. I think that it is a good way to learn efficiently at school and at home.

On the other hand

, we can know some news by watching

. Especially, in the morning, we can a lot of information from

shows.

In addition

this

information is updated every day. We can get the current situation of the society, government and market. These topics are very important to live as an individual so

children

should learn them.

shows produce them very efficiently and we can get them easily. In conclusion, It seems to me that

shows include much important information to study.

However

, there is a lot of kind of content in

shows.

Accordingly

, we must choose the right shows for

children

. If we choose the wrong

shows like bad animations, comedies and dramas,

children

may be affected by them. I think

this

is one of the bad sides of

shows so channel selection is a big deal to learn.

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Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at school and at home. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

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