Some people belive that money is the best gift for teenagers while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, a
lot
of people argue that
money
is the most important thing for young ages. Personally, I agree with
this
opinion. I describe both sides, positive and negative.
First
of all, on the positive side that we consider that
money
is the best gift for teenagers, it is able to provide a
lot
of good
experiences
.
For instance
, if our children have enough
money
, Put simply, if we don't pay for young, they have never got these chances! they have choices to study abroad and join summer schools. In my own case, I think that these
experiences
are especially important for young generations because adults have no times to get these
experiences
even if they have enough
money
. These
experiences
will work good in their future.
On the other hand
, there are not affected by these
experiences
when youngers are not motivated well. Motivations are one of the most important things to learn somethings. When they are enough motivated, they could learn a
lot
of things themselves.
For example
, there are many ways to learn in my country. They will learn a
lot
from textbooks, TV shows, the internet and books even if they don't have much
money
. People who say that
money
is not the best way to learn think that young individuals who are not motivated learn nothing even if we pay
money
for them. In conclusion, both are very important to educate the young.
However
, in the current situation, these
experiences
will be advantageous.
Therefore
, I believe paying
money
for our children is a good way to teach them methods to live as individuals in society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fostering
  • independence
  • decision-making skills
  • financial management
  • non-monetary gifts
  • lasting impact
  • thoughtfulness
  • strengthen relationships
  • personalized gifts
  • experience-based gifts
  • personal development
  • relationship building
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