Today foods travel thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

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from all over the world, because consumers can import

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due availability of transportation.In my opinion , It has many merits which outweigh its demerits with

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notion and my opinion will be discussed in

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paragraphs with a suitable conclusion. First,

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can be imported from most places by air or water . The storage facility is

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improved by which

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which tends to ruin easily can be stored for many days.

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, Currency exchange is

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easy nowadays , so

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do not have to worry about payment. Now if we

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about the bright side ,

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are getting a better amount of money than local markets;

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, dollars have more value if converted into rupees.

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, Nowadays many

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are travelling overseas and they don'

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want to miss their

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which tends to buy them imported

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of their preference from grocery stores.which makes

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trend more positive as they don'

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have to miss their favourite cuisines

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lack of ingredients.

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trend is impacting local

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because now consumers are more attracted to imported

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rather than local

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to that ,some

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don'

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want to

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new flavours and remain strict with their choices and flavours which makes

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market less predictable and more and more

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gets wasted . Local

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are suffering so much

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as many

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in their area are trying different

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and can make that forever choice.

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it has more upsides than downsides. Considering as consumer side they don'

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have to worry about variety and

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but it definitely impacts local

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task response

The essay addresses the prompt effectively, discussing the reasons for the trend of foods traveling long distances and evaluating it as a positive or negative trend.

coherence and cohesion

The introduction introduces the topic and the writer's opinion clearly. Each paragraph develops a separate aspect of the topic and transitions between ideas are smooth. A conclusion summarizing the main points is provided.

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

302 words

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Today foods travel thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that the only reason for learning language is in order to travel ro or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible.

Please elaborate on your current physical and mental health, including any dental or oral treatment, medical interventions, and mental health therapy or counseling.