You recently traveled on a train which arrived very late causing you to miss an appointment. Write a letter to the train company. In your letter, -explain what caused the delay in the journey -tell them what happened because of the delay -ask them for a refund

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to express my grave concern about the train which was late by 3 hours. It happened on the 23rd of January were I was travel from Sydney to Coventry. I had an appointment with one of the famous cardiologists on the same day. As I am suffering from serious heart disease my doctor recommended meeting that doctor as he is a specialist in cardiac diseases.

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I got a chance to meet him. My appointment was at 10.00am

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since the train was late for around half n hour I missed the chance to consult him. Again I have to wait for more than 2 months to get an appointment. I am very disappointed with the services of your company and I am requesting you to kindly take better action to avoid

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incidents.

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, I am requesting you to kindly refund my money of 15 pounds and I will attach a copy of the ticket along with

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letter. Kindly do the needful and contact me if any information is needed. Thanking You Yours faithfully Rose Margret

rinirosejohnsonSun Sep 11 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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9 paragraphs

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You recently traveled on a train which arrived very late causing you to miss an appointment. Write a letter to the train company. In your letter, -explain what caused the delay in the journey -tell them what happened because of the delay -ask them for a refund

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world". Use reasons and details to support your opinion.

It is important for travelers and business people to understand the cultures they come into contact with. However, briefly. What are the main advantages of doing so? What do you think is the disadvantage of not doing so?

People in the current generations are not fit and active. What are the problems. What can be done to encourage people to participate in sports activities.