Write about the following topic: Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Schools must not only focus on teaching subjects but must help
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children
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children
learning
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new skills including social matters
such
as parenting.
Yes
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i
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agree we should implement
this
brilliant thought to make a better future for the coming
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generation
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generation
. If
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children
childrens
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children
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were taught to be
a
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good
parent
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parents
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, they will learn to respect their father and mother and know
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not an easy job to be a
parent
.Youngsters going to schools have the capability to adopt everything taught at
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of
time
and live the rest of
his
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their
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life with
this
principal
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principle
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.
For example
, the
children
look for a role model either in their teacher or in their father and mother,
however
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they act and pretend to be similar to them. If they learn
love
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and care the output will turn hate into love . To be a
parent
one needs to
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sacrifice
sacrfice
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sacrifice
his own
time
and energy to spend
time
with their
children
. Looking after
children
doesnt
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doesn't
only mean
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with them but need to
look
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after their education and their medical expenses. Raising
children
without any condition and
instead
giving them unconditional love and affection even after they made tons of mistakes. Correcting their mistakes and
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being positive allows them to speak and express
freely
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themselves freely
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without fear and hesitation. As we all know good upbringing starts from home and a school for a young person is their
second
home where they spend most of their
time
during early age and
thus
educating to be a good
parent
should be made
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mandatory
at every high school to make a brighter future.
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