You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Mr Smith, Hope you are doing well, I would like to express my interest in

upcoming

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Accounting and Finance. I am keen to travel

Turkey

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to Turkey

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to attend

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professional event, It would

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definitely

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be help full to

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improve

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improve

my working skills.

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, everything is depending upon my

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I would like to ask

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details about

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seminar

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of all kindly let me know about the commencing date, time, and major events of

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seminar

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, I would like to ask about where we will be staying, and what would be the approximate total

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expense

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incurred by one person.

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, please inform me about the dress code and any other important

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which we should take care

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request you to guide me about the place where the

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, so that I may visit the other

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renowned

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nearby

.Your swift reply will be appreciated. Your Sincerely, Jhon.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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154 words

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