Earlier technology development brought more changes to life of ordinary people than the recent technology development do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that
,
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apply
modern day
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modern-day
technology
had fewer
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less
impact
on our day-to-day life when compared with previously developed Fix the agreement mistake
impacts
technology
. In my opinion, I partially agree with the statement because I believe that present-day technological advancements have the same impact as ancient technology
. This
essay will explain in detail the reasons for my stance as well as examples in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
with, ancient inventions
are the source of inspiration for modern inventions
. At present ,to develop a product scientists use technology
developed by our ancestors . For instance
, every vehicle used in road transportation is inspired by bull carts, which were the main source of transportation in the olden days. These earlier developments played a huge role in making the recent inventions
more advance and efficient. Without this
earlier technology
, we would find it very difficult to develop this
kind of technology
.
On the other hand
, we can observe many scientifical advancements which had no relation to the older inventions
. For example
, the internet was one of the inventions
which is
developed with completely new techniques. The Internet is considered one of the greatest Change the verb form
are
inventions
in the history of mankind. It has opened numerous possibilities of
humans. Change preposition
for
Although
the Internet is a modern technological advancement, it is widely used in various industries such
as telecommunication, education, transportation, etc.
To conclude, both earlier and advanced technologies have the same amount of impact on human life.In spite most
of the present-day Change preposition
of most
inventions
being inspired by the past we can many new technologies emerging.Submitted by rahultulaila on
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