Earlier technology development brought more changes to life of ordinary people than the recent technology development do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that
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on our day-to-day life when compared with previously developed
technology
. In my opinion, I partially agree with the statement because I believe that present-day technological advancements have the same impact as ancient
technology
.
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To begin
with, ancient
inventions
are the source of inspiration for modern
inventions
. At present ,to develop a product scientists use
technology
developed by our ancestors .
For instance
, every vehicle used in road transportation is inspired by bull carts, which were the main source of transportation in the olden days. These earlier developments played a huge role in making the recent
inventions
more advance and efficient. Without
this
earlier
technology
, we would find it very difficult to develop
this
kind of
technology
.
On the other hand
, we can observe many scientifical advancements which had no relation to the older
inventions
.
For example
, the internet was one of the
inventions
which
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developed with completely new techniques. The Internet is considered one of the greatest
inventions
in the history of mankind. It has opened numerous possibilities
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humans.
Although
the Internet is a modern technological advancement, it is widely used in various industries
such
as telecommunication, education, transportation, etc. To conclude, both earlier and advanced technologies have the same amount of impact on human life.In spite
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of the present-day
inventions
being inspired by the past we can many new technologies emerging.
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