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City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the are

#city #planners #mall
The map depicts how three new places are constructed in Branfield
city
. Overall, it is clearly observed that the town is completely redeveloped. The commercial undergoes considerable development, and a number of new places are built. With regard to recreational areas, the Golf course did not change. It lies in the west of the
city
. On the commercial side, a new site is set up to the north of the
city
 Centre and a piece of the Housing estate which is located in the north of the
city
 was moved to the S1, and it is rebuilt to reduce its size. S1 is surrounded by many infrastructure features
such
 as roads and railways and rivers.
On the other hand
, S2 is built in the southeast of the
city
. The industrial estate which is situated in the east of the
city
 did not change. It is
also
 worth mentioning that a new shopping Centre is set up.
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