At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people.
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situation creates some advantages and difficulties for societies. Linking Words
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increase the expenditure on preparing recreational facilities. In my opinion, the benefits of Linking Words
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subject are far more despite having some disadvantages.
The most significant benefit of a large number of young age groups is that they can master or improve some important parts of their countries Linking Words
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For example
, in China, one of the most populous countries in the world, the young Linking Words
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Moreover
, these kinds of nations are happier and more motivated in comparison with others.
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On the other hand
, there are many drawbacks as well. The remarkable one is the governments have to build or prepare several leisure facilities because the youth need to spend their free time on many interesting or exciting activities. So, the governments will face a huge amount of cost in solving Linking Words
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, in developed communities, a big part of the government budget is assigned to setting recreational places. The Linking Words
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disadvantage is that the governments have to create more and more job opportunities and control the rate of unemployment by assigning a lot of money for achieving Linking Words
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To sum up, increasing the proportion of the young age group creates positive and negative effects on society. In my opinion, the benefits will be stronger than the drawbacks, if the nations can predict all future issues and find suitable solutions for them in advance.Linking Words
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