Some people believe that studying abroad is important because it expands a person's knowledge and understanding of the world. Others feel that it is better to study at home because that is the best way to prepare for a career in the student's own country. Discuss both these views, and give your opinion.

Ms Jane Gold Headnurse Primrose Nursing Home #3 Blackwood Street Oldtown May 15, 2021 RE: Mr George Gale, DOB: April 24, 1936 Dear Ms Gold, I am writing with regard to the discharge of Mr George Gale, who presented in Oldtown hospital
due to
a urinary tract infection that possibility cause of his fall. He requires additional care upon discharge. On the day of admission May 9, he reported that he experienced a fall,
subsequently
, a head strike happened.
Therefore
, notable confusion and disorientation were seen.
Additionally
, his vital signs were elevated,and a urinalysis was ordered and which reveals he has a high bacterial infection. Within 4 days in the hospital he was treated with amoxicillin intravenously: 750mg every 8 hours. Afterwards, his vitals returned to normal. His medical record shows that he was diagnosed with Osteoarthritis and he takes paracetamol for it. He has had hypertension since 2009 and takes Felodipine 5mg to control his blood pressure levels. In 2013, GORD was
also
detected and he takes antacids self-treated.
In addition
, non-specific colitis with ongoing monitoring was diagnosed. Today, Mr Gale is set for discharge, but, there are some concerns that need to address. He is eager to go home as early as possible, but, he is known to live by himself.
Additionally
, there is no home help at the moment. He has had episodes of confusion please assess him for his independent living. It is
also
beneficial for him to do 30 minutes per day physical activity
due to
lowered mobility. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Nurse
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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