Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In today’s modern society, it is
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belief that
music
is a good solution to link
people
who come from
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different backgrounds or
ages
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brackets.
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me
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, I completely agree with that point of view.
To begin
with,
music
enhances harmony and understanding between different cultures. Meanwhile,
Music
is considered
as
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a universal language which helps
people
from any
nations
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can understand and immerse
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themselves into
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its rhythms. USUK
songs
,
for example
, are the most popular
songs
which are listened
by
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many
people
around the world. Albeit listeners may not understand the lyrics written in English, they still can share with each other
about
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their opinions of these
songs
or their emotions
such
as sadness or empathy when hearing the rhythms and melodies.
Besides
that, it is undeniable that through
music
,
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written
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can share with listeners about their cultures and customs, so it is a good way for
people
to learn and know about new nations in other to more understand the world. Another reason is that
music
also
strengthens bonds between all age groups and generations.
For instance
, if
people
are interested in a certain type of
music
, they will tend to join some
music
forums or clubs to meet others who have
a
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similar interests. In
such
places,
people
can
listen
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their
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songs
or play some instruments together.
In addition
,
music
can eradicate the generation gaps between youngers and elders. Joining some certain festivals or
music
events,
for example
, can help them
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understand each other. In conclusion, I fully support the idea that
music
can create a strong connection between
people
of different cultures and ages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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