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AZGIS
PROJECT
 EXECUTIVE SUMMARY “GIS (Geographical İnformation
System
)
Methodology
 & Technical
Consultancy
 “ (AZGIS)
project
, The
project
 will be managed and coordinated by SOCAR Azerbaijan and will be realized for Azeri
Gas
. By
this
Project
, goals planned to be reached as listed below : a • Publication on websites Azerigaz and Republic of Azerbaijan about medium and low
gas
 distribution networks, systems and
gas
 distribution stations; • The
information
 below will be reported in the table on the Azerigaz web page, reflecting the current connectivity (free capacity) to
gas
 supply systems; • Conducting a
pilot
 GIS works before starting
development
 GIS-based
system
 to be published on Azerigaz’s
website
; • Graphic design optimized to enable users to obtain
information
, after the
development
 of a functional web page (web site
development
 is out of
scope
). Based on these, located on webpage
data
 about network
gas
 supply planning to be accessible for both cutomers and legal persons in a real time.
Overall
, in accordance with the legal legislation, it is the work of developing a
consultancy
,
methodology
 and
pilot
 implementation for a sustainable structured GIS-based
information
system
 that will provide up-to-date
information
 to consumers and legal entities to be published on the Azerigaz
website
 regulations, and that the
information
 detailed above is published in tabular form. The phases of the
Project
 provided below; •
Phase
 1.
Methodology
development
 / technological
consultancy
: In the first
phase
 of the
project
, the existing structure, business processes,
system
,
data
 and
data
 flows will be examined in detail with the analysis study. Technological
consultancy
 will be given and
methodology
 will be prepared for the necessary steps to improve these business processes,
data
 and
system
 and transition to the targeted GIS-based
information
system
 for the creation of the required
system
. The activities listed below will be carried out within the
scope
 of
this
project
phase
: oData structure, standardization and flow design oProcess periods,
system
 architecture, methodological improvements •
Phase
 2: Implementing a GIS-Based
Information
System
 (
pilot
 study): In the second
phase
 of the
project
, a
pilot
 study of the
information
system
 based on the geographical
information
system
 based on the requirements and
project
 outputs determined in the first
phase
 will be prepared and integrated with the
website
 (
website
development
 and procurement of licenses are not included in the
scope
 of the
project
). The activities listed below will be carried out within the
scope
 of
this
project
phase
 o Creation of an exemplary central GIS infrastructure o Transfer of digital
data
 to the
pilot
 application o
Pilot
 operation of GazNet
Information
System
 and Customer/Citizen Portal
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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