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AZGIS
PROJECT
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 EXECUTIVE SUMMARY “GIS (Geographical İnformation
System
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)
Methodology
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 & Technical
Consultancy
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 “ (AZGIS)
project
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, The
project
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 will be managed and coordinated by SOCAR Azerbaijan and will be realized for Azeri
Gas
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. By
this
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Project
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, goals planned to be reached as listed below : a • Publication on websites Azerigaz and Republic of Azerbaijan about medium and low
gas
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 distribution networks, systems and
gas
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 distribution stations; • The
information
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 below will be reported in the table on the Azerigaz web page, reflecting the current connectivity (free capacity) to
gas
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 supply systems; • Conducting a
pilot
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 GIS works before starting
development
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 GIS-based
system
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 to be published on Azerigaz’s
website
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; • Graphic design optimized to enable users to obtain
information
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, after the
development
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 of a functional web page (web site
development
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 is out of
scope
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). Based on these, located on webpage
data
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 about network
gas
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 supply planning to be accessible for both cutomers and legal persons in a real time.
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, in accordance with the legal legislation, it is the work of developing a
consultancy
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,
methodology
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 and
pilot
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 implementation for a sustainable structured GIS-based
information
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system
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 that will provide up-to-date
information
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 to consumers and legal entities to be published on the Azerigaz
website
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 regulations, and that the
information
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 detailed above is published in tabular form. The phases of the
Project
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 provided below; •
Phase
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 1.
Methodology
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development
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 / technological
consultancy
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: In the first
phase
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 of the
project
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, the existing structure, business processes,
system
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,
data
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 and
data
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 flows will be examined in detail with the analysis study. Technological
consultancy
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 will be given and
methodology
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 will be prepared for the necessary steps to improve these business processes,
data
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 and
system
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 and transition to the targeted GIS-based
information
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system
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 for the creation of the required
system
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. The activities listed below will be carried out within the
scope
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 of
this
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project
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phase
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: oData structure, standardization and flow design oProcess periods,
system
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 architecture, methodological improvements •
Phase
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 2: Implementing a GIS-Based
Information
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System
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 (
pilot
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 study): In the second
phase
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 of the
project
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, a
pilot
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 study of the
information
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system
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 based on the geographical
information
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system
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 based on the requirements and
project
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 outputs determined in the first
phase
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 will be prepared and integrated with the
website
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 (
website
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development
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 and procurement of licenses are not included in the
scope
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 of the
project
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). The activities listed below will be carried out within the
scope
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 of
this
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project
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phase
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 o Creation of an exemplary central GIS infrastructure o Transfer of digital
data
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 to the
pilot
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 application o
Pilot
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 operation of GazNet
Information
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System
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 and Customer/Citizen Portal

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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