To what extend do you agree. Traditional methods will be erradicated by new technology.
Some individuals say that with the development of newer techniques, traditional practices will and have already started to be forgotten. Since I disagree with
this
statement, in this
essay I’ll give my best explanations.
Traditions were always a torchlight to humanity in order to develop our social and technological skills. For instance
, no building could be built without the help of an example that has been built before. To learn how to make a house, you need a guide. That guidance could be written on a cave wall or could be published on a website. It doesn’t matter how you define the tradition
. If you are learning it from another source either by a wall painting or written book, it is tradition
so that way, knowledge and also
tradition
never gets lost.
Tradition
has always called
Add a missing verb
been called
as
a Change preposition
apply
tradition
,
since its foundations can never be found. As we dig deep Remove the comma
apply
further
to find its basis, we can not claim that the old is not relevant to the new. Since it is impossible to define or redefine this
change on a spot, a Greek philosopher has given a wonderful example of this
process, “One can not swim in the same river twice”. Thus
, that’s a
solid proof that it lives within another and will never be lost.
To summarise, I believe that Correct article usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
tradition
and as some people call it as the
knowledgeCorrect article usage
apply
,
will never be extinct. Even in daily life, we seek it and we often use it without realising it. It has been a guide to us since the beginning of life.Remove the comma
apply
Submitted by vuslat.olcer on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite