Write a letter to your friend who is thinking of taking a driving license and needs some advice. - Driving license is advantageous - Driving school - Extra guidance.

Dear John, I hope you are cool. It is really good to be responsible while driving as road safety matters a lot,
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that you should have a driving license. As the driving permit card is given after
theoretical
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a theoretical
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exam and physical driving assessment you are qualified and responsible while using a vehicle. The Driving license card will act as a primary identification
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many places. I got my driving permit recently and recommend you “Perth car Driving School” is
best
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in the town, as they charge reasonably and time duration for each session is 60 minutes.
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, they’re very flexible with
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and
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locations,
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driving
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a driving
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stimulator at their office which
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beginners to learn better, I would like to give some suggestions from my end, don’t panic while driving, on test
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make sure to keep your phone in silent mode and the most important thing is
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the seatbelt
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should be fastened before you start the car. I wish you good luck to get qualified
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driving
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the driving
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assessment. Best wishes Santosh
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