Modern children are suffering from those diseases which were once consider to be meant for the adults only. obesity is a major disease prevalent among the children. what are its causes and remedies?
In the present
scenario
most Add a comma
,scenario
of
the people like adults and Change preposition
apply
children
are suffering from Use synonyms
overweight
. Add a missing verb
being overweight
I
the olden days it Correct your spelling
In
was
affected only Unnecessary verb
apply
to
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by
the
adults but nowadays it is familiar Correct article usage
apply
with
only Change preposition
apply
with
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apply
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a juvenile
the juvenile
juvenile
. Fix the agreement mistake
juveniles
This
essay would delve into the possible reasons for Linking Words
this
trend and propound some repercussions.
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To begin
with, most Linking Words
of
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apply
the
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apply
parents
are not familiar with cooking healthy Use synonyms
food
in their home itself because of their busy schedule and Use synonyms
also
the hardness of work so Linking Words
that
prefer Correct pronoun usage
they
the
fast Correct article usage
apply
food
from the online merchant like Use synonyms
swigg
, Correct your spelling
swing
zomato
and so on. Correct your spelling
tomato
This
leads the Linking Words
children
to affect their Use synonyms
health
so that it can be irradicated only Use synonyms
through
cookingChange preposition
by
the
healthy Correct article usage
apply
food
in the home itself with suitable vegetables and other ingredients that Use synonyms
helps
to improve Change the verb form
help
the
mental Correct article usage
apply
health
and Use synonyms
also
the physical Linking Words
health
.
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Secondly
, most of the Linking Words
parents
are making Use synonyms
trend
that the Correct article usage
a trend
children
to take afternoon Use synonyms
food
in the Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
nearby
near by
cafeteria, hotel, Correct your spelling
nearby
fast
Correct word choice
and fast
food
Use synonyms
centre's
which may reduce the work burden of Change noun form
centre
parents
in the morning because Use synonyms
of
that most of the Change preposition
apply
children
have problems that may affect their future Use synonyms
this
can be reduced by promoting the Linking Words
parents
to cook healthy Use synonyms
food
in the home and Use synonyms
also
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comple
them to consume the whole Correct your spelling
compel
food
that was given by them.
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Thirdly
, nowadays most Linking Words
of
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apply
the
people Correct article usage
apply
has
no Change the verb form
have
time
manners because some people will not eat Use synonyms
food
Use synonyms
in
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at
proper
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the proper
time
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in
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apply
cause
they consume Correct your spelling
case
in
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it in
wrong
manner which may affect their body. Change the article
the wrong
Linking Words
However
it can Add a comma
,However
be
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be decreased
decrease
by eating the Correct your spelling
decreased
food
at Use synonyms
proper
Add an article
the proper
time
with a proper Use synonyms
Use synonyms
time table
.
To concludeCorrect your spelling
timetable
that
, obesity can Correct word choice
apply
reduced
easily by everyone in Add a missing verb
be reduced
this
world only through Linking Words
their
Correct pronoun usage
apply
food
control and consuming Use synonyms
the
healthy Correct article usage
a
food
diet plan. Every person has to believe that Use synonyms
health
is the Use synonyms
first
priority to everyone in Linking Words
this
world.Linking Words
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