You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • apologies for what happened • explain why you missed the deadline • tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

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Dear Sir, I am writing you
this
letter on behalf of my team to apologise , as we failed to meet the given deadline for Pharamaprix Project and lost our pipelined project. I certainly understand your situation ,
however
, I would like to share why the deadline has been missed, due to
this
pandemic our few senior resources went on sick leaves and we lack development resources. Another reason is ,
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software becomes paid now which was open-source earlier. which took time to get approvals from management and installation was
also
difficult due to the security policies of the company.
Therefore
, We missed our precious time in managing all these things and we missed the deadline, even though,our resources worked to their full potential. Again, I want to apologise for losing our important client, which always plays important role in the company's revenue. I would
also
like to ensure ,in future we will prefer paid software
instead
of freeware. I hope you will understand and will support as earlier. Yours faithfully, Pooja Raikwar
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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