Some people think that the detailed criminal description in newspapers and on TV has bad influences, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many
people
believe that describing social evils about crime on television and newspapers
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in newspapers
have
negative impacts on watchers. In my opinion, depicting has both advantages and disadvantages because it all affects the Correct subject-verb agreement
has
behavior
of some individuals, so I think it should be broadcast at a moderate level for Change the spelling
behaviour
people
to clearly perceive social problems in the country.
News reports or magazine articles always talk about the events of the day including robberies or murders and this
helps people
to improve their own safety. Because, the more detailed the explanation of a case, the more people
raise awareness. For instance
, the case of robbery
of the gold shop and the murder of Le Van Luyen in Luc Nam has shocked public opinionCorrect article usage
the robbery
a
long time, he massacred the gold shop owner and his wife and a baby. The case was simulated on the scene through TV channels so that Change preposition
for a
people
know the process of Le Van Luyen and the cause of this
behavior
. Through that description, everyone will know the dangers that always suddenly appear, and must know how to prevent and educate their children well so that they have the right Change the spelling
behaviour
behavior
when they grow up.
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Nevertheless
, to a certain extent
the detailed description Add a comma
,extent
about
lawbreakers on social media could make some Change preposition
of
people
badly affected and they can go against public morality. And these are provocative actions for people
who don't have much understanding. For example
, in a bank robbery in Dong Nai province, a robber with a gun overpowered a bank employee and forced them to give him money, then
the robber quickly ran away after taking the money. Many Correct word choice
and then
people
see it as a brave activity and follow it and the reality of this
is a danger due to not careful education when they are a child. Specifically, people
all understand that children always have the habit of doing what they see and what happens if they catch criminals when they grow up. Or for
adults who do not have Change preposition
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they
will have false perceptions that easily lead to robberies to get money. Correct pronoun usage
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This
would be a worrying thing because there will definitely be more new crimes, which negatively affect the safety of a nation. On the other hand
, people
no longer trust each other, they are always wary of the people
next
to them and there is no naturalness in communication.
In summary, the descriptions on
news articles and TV are both good and bad. It helps Change preposition
in
people
know to protect themselves and Correct pronoun usage
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but Change the spelling
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also
makes some people
follow. So, before this
description was broadcast in the media, I think that it should be carefully censored and covered in moderation.Submitted by vuanhhibstrading on
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