Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised in the correct place. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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to godliness. I abide by
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principle.
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totally agree that it is extremely important to keep your home as well as your workplace tidy. There are several benefits of having everything organised be it where you live or where you work. It is applicable not only to the physical environment but
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devices
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we use at
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. Having it well organised makes us more efficient, which in turn saves our
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. It’s easier to find everything as and when required. Especially, when in
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time
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crunch, having everything in its place saves us
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helps in reducing
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stress. When we know
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the back of our mind that everything is well organised, we are more at ease because we are aware that all we need will be just at one
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distance. Even when in hurry, we will get anything we need in a jiffy without having to search for things for long.
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, when an important file on our laptop is named correctly and stored in
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folder, we tend to find the file quickly as opposed to when it is not named appropriately and stored in a miscellaneous folder. In
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case, when the boss requests
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a file immediately, we can be quick at delivering it to the boss without panicking. In conclusion, tidiness and organising helps us in
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management and
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reduces
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stress.
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, it is essential that we keep our homes as well as workplace spick and span and well organised.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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