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Some people say there is no need for print newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,the expansion of
technology
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 surged rapidly.Someone believe that printed newspapers are unnecessary in those days.
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 essay will articulate the viewpoint in the coming paragraph. I completely agree with the notion and to discuss it in detail. Today's world is digital oriented,The printed newspaper gives only posts
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 and updates.whereas in the digital field, all we can get easily and conveniently online ,especially on the internet.
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 ,these days the advancement of
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 the latest
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 we can get from the e-communication
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. The media
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 promoted
people
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 to watch online
news
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 channels. The latest spot
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 or anything gets from the online platform spotty.
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 , social media like Facebook,Twitter,Insta and so on helps
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 to know the latest updates within a time span whereas printed newspapers can get post
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 .In
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 globally digital world printed newspapers are not much helpful.
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, Adults especially the aged adults in the '80s, cannot even
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 the latest gadgets like tablets, laptops,Smartphones and so on .As a
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 they have some difficulty knowing and reading the
news
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 online.
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 may not affect the advancement of
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. so it doesn't matter for the invention of new applications. And
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 some study shows that the media peoples are planning to stop printing papers within 5 years.
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 we have to learn the new
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 for our
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. We all are ready with the world's current level of
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system
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. To conclude, certain aspects, without the printed newspaper affect a minority of
people
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, But the majority of
people
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 already
use
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 the
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system
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. The percentage of
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 who
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 the latest method is high. I completely agree with the viewpoint.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital revolution
  • sustainability
  • instantaneous
  • editorial integrity
  • demographic disparities
  • gatekeeping in journalism
  • nostalgic value
  • economic viability
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