You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: - say where you think you left the papers - explain why they are so important - tell the manager what you want him./her to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Jordan, I attended a meeting at your
hotel
yesterday. after reaching home i
found out that my important Change the capitalization
I
documents
were left at your Hotel
. As far as i
remember, the papers were left at the main banquet hall of your Change the capitalization
I
hotel
, and my table number was 21.
The documents
include my passport, study permit, and some work-related documents
. Therefore
I must get those documents
before I leave for my country on the 20th of November which is 4 days from now.
If you found that set of documents
I want you to mail them to the address I mentioned above. In case mailing the documents
is not feasible for you, please keep it with you. I am going to visit the hotel
tomorrow so I will pick it up for you.
Your assistance will be highly appreciated.
Sincerely.
JordanSubmitted by pramodv997 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to separate different ideas into distinct paragraphs to enhance clarity.
Task Response
Although the purpose is clearly communicated, check for grammatical errors and correct article usage to improve clarity, e.g. 'after reaching home i found out' should be 'after reaching home, I found out.'
Coherence and Cohesion
You have a clear and formal greeting and closing, which is appropriate for a letter to a hotel manager.
Task Response
The letter includes all the necessary elements requested: where the papers are, why they are important, and what action you want from the manager.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite