today,online shops are increasing, some people think that in the future all the traditional shops will close. what is your opinion?

Nowadays online shopping has increased over a period of time,

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some population believe that in the coming years.there will be no more traditional shopping left .I completely agree with the above statement and in the upcoming paragraph will give my opinion

To begin

with ,online shopping is a convenient and time-saving method .

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is to say that if the public buy

products

online they do not have to travel from one place to another which helps them to save time

moreover

it's an easy talk one can easily buy a variety of items with few clicks.

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, it is been seen people are using apps like amazon and a big basket where they and buy all kinds of fruits and day-to-day

products

through the internet

thus

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this

is a convenient and timesaving method Another reason is traditional department stores do not provide all

products

in a single shop

this

is to say that we have to travel shop by shop to buy a different kinds of

products

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if they have to buy fruits as well as electronic item public have to travel one to stores to Another which seems to difficult task these days

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believe that travelling to the different outlet for day to day resources is waste of time

hence

it is predeceased that traditional shops may close by end of 2050 In ,conclusion online supermarkets are far better than traditional stores as they are the quick and time-saving method