Some say that at all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, a lot of time is spent learning the facts and not enough time is devoted to practical skills. Do you agree or not?

In many countries across the

world

, children need to spend over 18 years in the

education

system from colleagues to universities before getting a job. Some people reckon

this

amount of time is too long for kids, and children should learn more about other essential

skills

. In

this

essay, the reasons to support my agreement with

this

statement will be presented in the following paragraphs. The

first

reason that nowadays

education

should focus more on practical and creative

skills

are

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the advancement of modern technology. As the

world

has changed, and various jobs can be replaced by automation, the university should concentrate more on the

skills

that cannot be subsidized by the invention including creative music, arts, and sports.

For example

, nowadays, the

world

has internet banking, which is able to replace a million employees working in banks.

However

, artificial intelligence cannot supersede the creativity of mankind.

Secondly

, a prolonged period of learning does not guarantee

that is

effective

education

. Effective teaching with proper duration can lead to

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better

result

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. To illustrate, ordinary schools in Thailand teach their student for more than 8 hours a day, and five days a week, and most of the

curriculum

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are being taught in classrooms, but the standard of

education

is ranked a lot lower than those schools in Finland. It is the country that has the best

education

in the

world

, which teach students only 5 hours a day and 4 days a week.

Moreover

, they allow their students to spend leisure time with family and do beneficial activities

such

as music, sports, art and so on. In conclusion, recently, students spend too much time learning in schools and universities which does not provide optimal benefits to them. In my opinion, the

education

system should prioritize other beneficial

skills

due to the development of technology that will replace most human jobs, and effective learning from successful countries.