You experienced an incident on public transport that caused you distress. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter ▪ describe the incident ▪ explain how this incident affected you ▪ suggest what could be done about it

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter regarding the incident that happened yesterday, when I was coming back to don mills station via bus no A205 and the

driver

's name is " Danish Kumar" . which makes me feel disappointed about the service staff. Let me explain the incident

first

, Actually , Yesterday I took my mother-in-law to a general hospital for after surgery checkup, recently she had her knee transplant operation, and due to ,

this

she has to use

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wheelchair. When the station came and we are about to take her out , the

driver

started the bus suddenly and she fell off her wheelchair.

This

incident make me feel disturbed and

this

behaviour of the public transport bus

driver

raised the question of whether public transport is safe for elders or younger to travel alone .I would suggest that you should take strict action against

this

driver

, as

this

attitude is completely unacceptable. Hope you will take appropriate action so that drivers will become more responsible . Yours faithfully, Pooja

Submitted by pooja.raikwar27 on Tue Sep 13 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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172 words

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