Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons

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Fast
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KFC
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become a crucial part of survival in many areas. A certain section of people believes that it is an unhealthy diet and bad effect on their
lifestyle
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. In
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context, I do agree that junk
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is unhealthy for our daily diet. I will elaborate
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on the rationale behind the above statement.
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of foremost, junk
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has always been considered unhealthy,
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however
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due to our busy
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, we tend to ignore the fact and consume it daily without our knowledge. Fast
food
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is more flavourful than healthy
food
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. Consuming healthy
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daily for certain individuals has become a boring selection,
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they tend to choose unhealthy
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over healthy
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. In modern days for convenience's
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many parents serve fast
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to their adolescents. To illustrate
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, in research it was indicated that in Sri Lanka, approximately 40% of students consume burgers, and fries during their lunch break as well as for dinner.
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, daily consumption of unhealthy is not a nutritional diet to eat up.
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can lead to non-communicable diseases at an early stage
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as cholesterol, diabetes and so on.
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, it will
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lead to obesity, with our busy-paced lives as many individuals lack in their exercise as well.
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, to describe my
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I am a big fan of junk
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, during weekdays after work, for my ,convenience I get cravings to purchase burgers from a local joint called Street burgers. Deep down I know it is not very healthy,
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for short-term ,
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happiness
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I consume it for dinner. In conclusion, in my point of view
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it is mandatory that we make an effort to maintain a healthy
lifestyle
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regardless of our busy
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. Consuming unhealthy
food
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will be a big impact on our lives.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prevalence
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • culinary culture
  • wholesome meals
  • inherently
  • health consequences
  • nutritional options
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