Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons

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Fast

food

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McDonald

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KFC

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become a crucial part of survival in many areas. A certain section of people believes that it is an unhealthy diet and bad effect on their

lifestyle

. In

this

context, I do agree that junk

food

is unhealthy for our daily diet. I will elaborate

further

on the rationale behind the above statement.

First

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of foremost, junk

food

has always been considered unhealthy,

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however

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due to our busy

lifestyle

, we tend to ignore the fact and consume it daily without our knowledge. Fast

food

is more flavourful than healthy

food

. Consuming healthy

food

daily for certain individuals has become a boring selection,

therefore

they tend to choose unhealthy

food

over healthy

food

. In modern days for convenience's

sake

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many parents serve fast

food

to their adolescents. To illustrate

this

, in research it was indicated that in Sri Lanka, approximately 40% of students consume burgers, and fries during their lunch break as well as for dinner.

Secondly

, daily consumption of unhealthy is not a nutritional diet to eat up.

This

can lead to non-communicable diseases at an early stage

such

as cholesterol, diabetes and so on.

Moreover

, it will

also

lead to obesity, with our busy-paced lives as many individuals lack in their exercise as well.

For example

, to describe my

lifestyle

I am a big fan of junk

food

, during weekdays after work, for my ,convenience I get cravings to purchase burgers from a local joint called Street burgers. Deep down I know it is not very healthy,

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however

for short-term ,

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happiness

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I consume it for dinner. In conclusion, in my point of view

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it is mandatory that we make an effort to maintain a healthy

lifestyle

regardless of our busy

lifestyle

. Consuming unhealthy

food

will be a big impact on our lives.

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