Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons

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Fast

food

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McDonald

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KFC

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become a crucial part of survival in many areas. A certain section of people believes that it is an unhealthy diet and bad effect on their

lifestyle

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. In

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context, I do agree that junk

food

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is unhealthy for our daily diet. I will elaborate

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on the rationale behind the above statement.

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of foremost, junk

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has always been considered unhealthy,

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however

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due to our busy

lifestyle

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, we tend to ignore the fact and consume it daily without our knowledge. Fast

food

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is more flavourful than healthy

food

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. Consuming healthy

food

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daily for certain individuals has become a boring selection,

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they tend to choose unhealthy

food

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over healthy

food

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. In modern days for convenience's

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many parents serve fast

food

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to their adolescents. To illustrate

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, in research it was indicated that in Sri Lanka, approximately 40% of students consume burgers, and fries during their lunch break as well as for dinner.

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, daily consumption of unhealthy is not a nutritional diet to eat up.

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can lead to non-communicable diseases at an early stage

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as cholesterol, diabetes and so on.

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, it will

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lead to obesity, with our busy-paced lives as many individuals lack in their exercise as well.

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, to describe my

lifestyle

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I am a big fan of junk

food

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, during weekdays after work, for my ,convenience I get cravings to purchase burgers from a local joint called Street burgers. Deep down I know it is not very healthy,

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for short-term ,

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happiness

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I consume it for dinner. In conclusion, in my point of view

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it is mandatory that we make an effort to maintain a healthy

lifestyle

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regardless of our busy

lifestyle

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. Consuming unhealthy

food

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will be a big impact on our lives.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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300 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

prevalence
sedentary lifestyle
culinary culture
wholesome meals
inherently
health consequences
nutritional options

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